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Blog EntryJun 24, '08 1:29 AM
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As I Ebb'd with the Ocean of Life

As I ebb'd with the ocean of life,
As I wended the shores I know,
As I walk'd where the ripples continually wash you Paumanok,
Where they rustle up hoarse and sibilant,
Where the fierce old mother endlessly cries for her castaways,
I musing late in the autumn day, gazing off southward,
Held by this electric self out of the pride of which I utter poems,
Was seiz'd by the spirit that trails in the lines underfoot,
The rim, the sediment that stands for all the water and all the
        land of the globe.

Fascinated, my eyes reverting from the south, dropt, to follow
        those slender windrows,
Chaff, straw, splinters of wood, weeds, and the sea-gluten,
Scum, scales from shining rocks, leaves of salt-lettuce, left by the
        tide,
Miles walking, the sound of breaking waves the other side of me,
Paumanok there and then as I thought the old thought of likenesses,
These you presented to me you fish-shaped island,
As I wended the shores I know,
As I walk'd with that electric self seeking types.


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As I wend to the shores I know not,
As I list to the dirge, the voices of men and women wreck'd,
As I inhale the impalpable breezes that set in upon me,
As the ocean so mysterious rolls toward me closer and closer,
I too but signify at the utmost a little wash'd-up drift,
A few sands and dead leaves to gather,
Gather, and merge myself as part of the sands and drift.

O baffled, balk'd, bent to the very earth,
Oppress'd with myself that I have dared to open my mouth,
Aware now that amid all that blab whose echoes recoil upon me I
        have not once had the least idea who or what I am,
But that before all my arrogant poems the real Me stands yet
        untouch'd, untold, altogether unreach'd,
Withdrawn far, mocking me with mock-congratulatory signs and
        bows,
With peals of distant ironical laughter at every word I have written,
Pointing in silence to these songs, and then to the sand beneath.

I perceive I have not really understood any thing, not a single
        object, and that no man ever can,
Nature here in sight of the sea taking advantage of me to dart
        upon me and sting me,
Because I have dared to open my mouth to sing at all.


3
You oceans both, I close with you,
We murmur alike reproachfully rolling sands and drift, knowing
        not why,
These little shreds indeed standing for you and me and all.

You friable shore with trails of debris,
You fish-shaped island, I take what is underfoot,
What is yours is mine my father.

I too Paumanok,
I too have bubbled up, floated the measureless float, and been
        wash'd on your shores,
I too am but a trail of drift and debris,
I too leave little wrecks upon you, you fish-shaped island.

I throw myself upon your breast my father,
I cling to you so that you cannot unloose me,
I hold you so firm till you answer me something.

Kiss me my father,
Touch me with your lips as I touch those I love,
Breathe to me while I hold you close the secret of the murmuring
        I envy.


4
Ebb, ocean of life, (the flow will return,)
Cease not your moaning you fierce old mother,
Endlessly cry for your castaways, but fear not, deny not me,
Rustle not up so hoarse and angry against my feet as I touch you
        or gather from you.

I mean tenderly by you and all,
I gather for myself and for this phantom looking down where we
        lead, and following me and mine.
Me and mine, loose windrows, little corpses,
Froth, snowy white, and bubbles,
(See, from my dead lips the ooze exuding at last,
See, the prismatic colors glistening and rolling,)
Tufts of straw, sands, fragments,
Buoy'd hither from many moods, one contradicting another,
From the storm, the long calm, the darkness, the swell,
Musing, pondering, a breath, a briny tear, a dab of liquid or soil,
Up just as much out of fathomless workings fermented and thrown,
A limp blossom or two, torn, just as much over waves floating,
        drifted at random,
Just as much for us that sobbing dirge of Nature,
Just as much whence we come that blare of the cloud-trumpets,
We, capricious, brought hither we know not whence, spread out
        before you,
You up there walking or sitting,
Whoever you are, we too lie in drifts at your feet.
beach


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18 Comments
suggar202 wrote on Jun 24, '08
You oceans both, I close with you,
We murmur alike reproachfully rolling sands and drift, knowing
not why,
These little shreds indeed standing for you and me and all........ love walt whitmas.. as always
jayaramanms wrote on Jun 24, '08
Oceans are beautiful and you can for hours together. Similarly the poems of Walt Whitman are brilliant. I have read these poems when I blogged one of his poems in Poetry Wednesday earlier.Thank you for sharing them. Mine A Red, Red Rose by Robert Burns is at - http://jayaramanms.multiply.com/journal/item/207/POETRY_WEDNESDAY.
missgoodnite wrote on Jun 24, '08
I've never read anything by Walt Whitman....thank you for sharing...and thank you for your comments on mine :-)
poetessgarden wrote on Jun 24, '08
this one really hit home in some parts...love these lines:


Withdrawn far, mocking me with mock-congratulatory signs and
bows,
With peals of distant ironical laughter at every word I have written,
Pointing in silence to these songs, and then to the sand beneath.

brian51 wrote on Jun 24, '08
Nature, the sea they humble and soothe us and we find peace knowing we are just a small part of it all. Beautiful and so true.
bostonsdandd wrote on Jun 24, '08
sanssouciblogs wrote on Jun 24, '08
Thanks for the exquiste Whitman piece.

I perceive I have not really understood any thing, not a single
object, and that no man ever can,
Nature here in sight of the sea taking advantage of me to dart
upon me and sting me..

I oft feel this way.

An amazing read.

lauritasita wrote on Jun 24, '08
I felt very peaceful reading this with the music you have chosen. It's really lovely, thank you so much.
kwika wrote on Jun 24, '08
Excellent
dianahopeless wrote on Jun 24, '08
Love Whitman, and had never read this, that I can recall.
It is a great piece. TY for sharing. Love the music, too.

http://dianahopeless.multiply.com/journal/item/295/Silent_Charms_poem
danceinsilence wrote on Jun 24, '08
The ocean is the beginning and the end of our world. It starts somewhere, going everywhere.

"You up there walking or sitting,
Whoever you are, we too lie in drifts at your feet."

I have always looked at this ending the classiest two lines ever matched up. Thanks for bringing this one to the table for our eyes.

http://danceinsilence.multiply.com/journal/item/390/Poetry_Wednesday_Holder_Of_Wisdom



shankarg wrote on Jun 25, '08
Whoever you are, we too lie in drifts at your feet.
i felt the run of the tide at my feet,and run of your grace at the back of my mind, be blessed, thanks for your visit to mine!
lunarechoes wrote on Jun 25, '08
This is a new Whitman piece for me, too, and I loved it. Thank you!
ppiccola wrote on Jun 26, '08
the poems i read in your site, always give me a feeling of BLUE, and blue is peaceful, is touching, is tender, blue is the state of mind i always want to be, and the favorite of my colors, life should be blue as blu is the sky where bliss lies...thank you

http://ppiccola.multiply.com/journal/item/450/Goodbye
lonewolfwithin wrote on Jun 26, '08, edited on Jun 26, '08
i enjoyed the feeling and emotions from these, the sadness and the happiness... thank you so much for sharing these thoughts and feelings from this author!
skeezicks1957 wrote on Jun 27, '08
And I never knew "go with the flow" was thought of already in the late 1800s! Neat choice!
philsgal7759 wrote on Jun 27, '08
Going to visit family and the ocean next week
I really enjoy it.
How much of life can we find in the ways of nature
Lovely
zafreud wrote on Jun 28, '08
I hadn't read this one of Whitman! An excellent depiction of the oceanic travels we do in life!...Thank you!!! :)
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